check out my emotional poem; - Page 1

an ode to two that can not be named;

1+1=2
a fact so simple, self evident and true
but facts you deny, you believe in a lie
so here's a fact i made just for you

you are more absurd than two talking turds 
and between you, you don't even have half a clue

your twisted scriptures are unwanted fixtures
but you can't be told, you have no souls
your out of control two internet trolls
please God tell me something that's new.


well here' something swell i can't wait to tell
a tale of shtal, the avenging angel
with gouda the fraud waving your sword in the name of the lord
you will both be burning in hell.

the two lame pedigreedatabase preachers
you spend all your time "dying" to teach us
you have no shame, you are so vain
it's always the same, again and again
that's why you will never reach us

you don't even speak a word of Hebrew
yet you claim the God of the Jew
Yahweh is his name and he is as old and as dead as the brain in you.

and with that i bid you adieu 

Are you up for critiques?  The scope is commendable. There could be some improvement in form. But only if you want to hear that sort of thing.

please do, kind of just wrote it in one take just now, i never even write or read poetry as you can prolly tell.

apologies if Yahhew does not rhyme, i am not sure of pronunciation, i figured it sounds like YAHOO, seems fitting. but anyone who sees "his" face dies so not sure if that previlege extends to saying her name out loud....actually what happens if you say it's name into a mirror in a poorly lit room at night at the stroke of midnight, friday 13???

I think they have you on a string like a june bug VK4,
don't quit your day job......lol

Aye it be true vk4.......Ye be a depressed and negative sorry soul because ye know not the Lord...........Let this Ol Sailor warn thee, Ye tread on dangerous waters when Ye Blaspheme against the Lord Thy God Aye!   Ye best make amends and let the Lord enter the poor hollow shell ye reside in Aye

Or BURN  !!!!!!!!!!!!!


Hoist the colours












Moons.,
 

Aye,
and burn he did.








Moons

was that the capt'n himself that just posted????

i thought he was just a mythical creation, wow.


capt'n thanks for life coaching, err as you were mentioning what's right in the eyes of the lord why yr recent thread disappear - curious?



anyhoo, not even a thank you after i went to all the trouble of writing a poem to my two "Christian" friends - that's charitable.
 

Aye t' Landlubbers don't like many of me posts. They took down t' pic of me wench of over 33yrs Ayeee  It be true t' Capt could be deleted any second in these waters Ayee!!