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by vk4gsd on 06 October 2013 - 19:10
1+1 =2
A fact simple elegant and true
But facts you deny you believe in a lie
False premises, the book of genesis
There is no heaven, there is no hell
Break the spell
You are dead before you even die
F*ck what you believe
God is not the form of Adam and Eve
A talking snake in a tree
Everything living damned for eternity
A story tall of creation
God is the structure of every atom
God is the truth of a mathematical equation
In every woman and every man
In the warm smile of a trusted friend
Eternity is a babies eyes
But dumbly you gaze for a place in the sky
Every time you look above, you turn from truth, you turn from love
Time to eat some humble pie
Religion, the vision of a Son nailed upon a cross
Time to stop and count the cost
Of every mothers son that has been lost
When the plough becomes the sword
And again the blood does start to pour
Another war in the name of you Lord
How much blood is yet left to spill
On the pages of the book that says
THOU SHALT NOT KILL
A fact simple elegant and true
But facts you deny you believe in a lie
False premises, the book of genesis
There is no heaven, there is no hell
Break the spell
You are dead before you even die
F*ck what you believe
God is not the form of Adam and Eve
A talking snake in a tree
Everything living damned for eternity
A story tall of creation
God is the structure of every atom
God is the truth of a mathematical equation
In every woman and every man
In the warm smile of a trusted friend
Eternity is a babies eyes
But dumbly you gaze for a place in the sky
Every time you look above, you turn from truth, you turn from love
Time to eat some humble pie
Religion, the vision of a Son nailed upon a cross
Time to stop and count the cost
Of every mothers son that has been lost
When the plough becomes the sword
And again the blood does start to pour
Another war in the name of you Lord
How much blood is yet left to spill
On the pages of the book that says
THOU SHALT NOT KILL
by beetree on 06 October 2013 - 19:10
Great job. People look at the difference!
by Two Moons on 06 October 2013 - 20:10
Here I sit,
broken hearted,
tried to shit,
but only farted.....:)
broken hearted,
tried to shit,
but only farted.....:)
by vk4gsd on 06 October 2013 - 21:10
moons, glad to see you have recovered from yr recent bout with shtal. that was entertaining for sure.
by beetree on 06 October 2013 - 21:10
Hey, I know the difference. Moons wrote a bad poem, now I want to help him try and make it better. It is brave to put it all out there. Just take it as a compliment really; if they hate it, someone else loves it!
I'll get to the critique tomorrow.
I'll get to the critique tomorrow.
by Two Moons on 06 October 2013 - 21:10
Was a cold wet cloudy day, not much else going on.
But all good things must come to an end, and one can only kill so much time.
Seems like such a waste now.
i came away with nothing new, which was my only real hope to start with.
He's an empty shell, only a shadow of what was probably a thinking human being at one time.
A real boy turned to wood.
It's more sad than anything else, harm has been done, it comes at a price that everyone pays.
But all good things must come to an end, and one can only kill so much time.
Seems like such a waste now.
i came away with nothing new, which was my only real hope to start with.
He's an empty shell, only a shadow of what was probably a thinking human being at one time.
A real boy turned to wood.
It's more sad than anything else, harm has been done, it comes at a price that everyone pays.
by beetree on 06 October 2013 - 21:10
LOL, boy do I have my work cut out for me! Hahaha... I do love this, "A real boy turned to wood."
I just don't know what it was about Pinocchio and the Blue Fairy, was It? Just love that story! What a twist! Haha
I just don't know what it was about Pinocchio and the Blue Fairy, was It? Just love that story! What a twist! Haha
by Two Moons on 06 October 2013 - 21:10
A timeless story...........................
In reverse....................................
In reverse....................................
by Two Moons on 06 October 2013 - 21:10
Moons.
by Hundmutter on 07 October 2013 - 07:10
There'll be Pie in the Sky
When you Die ...
It's a Lie.
When you Die ...
It's a Lie.
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