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by beetree on 15 October 2011 - 23:10
by beetree on 16 October 2011 - 00:10
It was the cold that stopped her. It had to be that, because fear had made her sure a monster was waiting for her. This was not her hallway. The hallway of a million tiny pitter-patters of stockinged feet, sneakered or sandled, dirty and barefoot, running and slipping, forever bumping within the close walls, still echoing with the distant memory of the laughs and tears of her disappeared children.
Rachel could have killed someone, but there was no one there.
Just the cold.
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by beetree on 16 October 2011 - 13:10
He still hadn't reported them missing. He lay in his crumpled pile of sheets, the noiseless house giving him the creeps. He wondered....
by beetree on 17 October 2011 - 00:10
But he did. He ...
by beetree on 17 October 2011 - 14:10
Shaking his head in ...
by beetree on 17 October 2011 - 22:10
Rachel was sitting on her front porch when she noticed the boy behind the steering wheel of her neighbor's truck. He drove right over the curb as he backed out onto the street. She wondered when did he get his license? He was just a little boy... seems like yesterday.
She thought of the son and daughter who wouldn't know her, even if they were sitting right next to her in the local Dairy Queen, eating a Blizzard ice cream. It was all her fault. She hated herself, everyday, because she made herself think of how it was all her fault. She saw in her mind's eye, like a movie re-run; Dan coming in, showing her the picture on his cell phone. It was her. With her lover, getting in his car at the No Tell Motel. It got real ugly after that.
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by ggturner on 18 October 2011 - 21:10
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...Will sat in the truck as if in a daze. He didn't even remember driving to the diner. He felt so foggy. Where were his parents? They wouldn't leave him like this! He rubbed his sleepy eyes and jumped out of the truck. As he entered the diner, he brushed past a rough looking bearded man....

by Judy P on 18 October 2011 - 23:10
who was making his way out of the diner. He shivered, one that went clear to his toes, the kind of feeling his mother used to say felt like someone walking on his grave.
How did he get here he wondered, where were his parents, why did things feel so different. Maybe he would feel better once he ate, maybe then he would call the sheriff to tell him about his parents.
Suddenly he got a very scared feeling deep in his stomach, the strabger - the one he passed as he entered the diner - where did he know him from, when had he seen him before?
by beetree on 19 October 2011 - 18:10
He was headed to a most humble-looking house on the outskirts of town. He'd inherited it from his mother, when she'd passed away three years ago. When the money from the inheritance began to dry up, he decided to open shop on the first floor. He was a collector of sorts. Some antiquities, many peculiarites. And singularities were his absolute favorite. He was always looking for those. But he had to make a living and some things, for the right price he could let go.
He named his new shop:
DOOM & GLEAM
The ending is here.
I have that perfect something,
Come inside and see!
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When Rachel thought of Dan now, she could hate him, too, just a little bit. After the big fight, he'd thrown her car keys in the bushes. Threw her phone in the toilet and grabbed the kids and took off to his mom's house. He'd taken them there before when they had a real bad row, one other time before, so she wasn't too worried, then. It was only when the police came knocking on her door two nights later, around 2 a.m., with the very, very bad, and final news that she became alarmed. Very alarmed. Dan had left the highway in his truck, and it had rolled. He hadn't survived. She had a tiny bit of hope and relief though, because there were no signs that the kids had been with him. She waited until the cop left before she called her mother-in-law, to tell her that her son was dead, he did not survive his accident.
The cry of anquish from her mother-in-law is a sound she'll never forget. And she still feels the cry in her head she made when her mother-in-law told her through her tears of pain and denial, that she did not know where the children were! They had been staying with her, but Dan had taken them to, "A friends, just for a little bit, until he could figure out a few things."
It's hard for her to remember what was said after that. And it doesn't matter because no one still knows where her kids are. It was beginning to drive her mad.
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by Ninja181 on 19 October 2011 - 20:10

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